The AVENGERS cray crayness continues with my attempt at breaking down the structure of this THREE HOUR behemoth. Now that it’s been released on home video I’ve been able to spend some real quality time with it, delve deep within, and peel back the layers of the story structure of Avengers Endgame. I love talking about screenplay structure, but if…
Avengers Assemble! YES! I am finally tackling the BEAST that Avengers: Endgame! The monster hit of the year, the decade, the millennia, perhaps (arguably) EVER. You may be asking yourself, why have I waited this long to do a proper review? The answer is simple; the blu ray just came out last week, and I’ve been spending a lot of…
It’s that time of year again, OSCAR TIME!! I’m actually a pretty big nerd about watching the Globes and the Oscars. Some people may hate the self-congratulating, overly-social-conscious-to-the-point-of-it-getting-annoying (see the Globes for what I mean #wegetittheresachangecoming!), but I enjoy watching them, and make a point (or try) to watch all the nominated films before the big night. For the full…
When I first started buying DVD’s (and now Blu-rays) I thought the idea of a writer or director talking over a movie would be annoying and stupid. Until I actually took the time to listen and realized they’re awesome, even becoming the deciding factor on if I want to buy the home version, or no, if it doesn’t have a…
Let’s get real here: Amazing Spider-Man 2 was shit. It was so shit that Sony decided to reboot the entire franchise rather than make the third planned film. And dammit am I ever glad they did. Spider-Man: Homecoming is my favorite Spidey flick since the first Tobey Maguire/Sam Raimi outing. Sure, the general consensus is that Spider-Man 2 is the best,…
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