Alien Romulus promised to bring the franchise back to its terrifying roots, and, well… it definitely brought something back. The latest installment feels like the Alien you remember—but only if your memory is as fuzzy as a VHS tape left in your RCA TV-VCR combo that’s been gathering dust in the attic since 1996. The first two Alien films are…
The service involves editing your dialogue and action description, to make sure your screenplay is clean and reads as fast as possible. Think of it like your screenplay needs to lose some weight, and once I’m done it’s a lean, mean, screenplay machine! I also fix grammatical and format errors. Before my service: After my service: I go through your screenplay line-by-line, and edit your dialogue and description…
Sticky Notes service involves making extensive scene-by-scene comments directly onto the page of your PDF screenplay. This is done using Adobe Acrobats note feature and will give you a better insight into what is working and what is not. Feedback is given not only on how/if individual scenes are working, but also on the concept, story, structure, characters, dialogue, and scene as a whole.…
My script analysis gets right to the core of what’s working in your screenplay and, most importantly, how I can help you fix what’s not working. If you’re all in and ready to go, you can order by clicking the lovely button below this post. Now the coverage part can vary depending on how deep down the rabbit hole you want to go. On…